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At the hairdressers’, shampoo rinsing in the sink behind you, water drip drip drip. Towel drying your tresses then combing out the knots slick slick slick time now for the magic scissor blades eating at your hair clip clip clip.
Talk of last nights conquests, who was with who and did what dig dig dig dig. Would you like a coffee, tea or water, coffee black no sugar, please sip sip sip . Get the feathering done now, scissor blades flash hair falls snip snip snip snip Oh! that’s my favourite song, oh yeah! it is just so good to dance to click click click.
Are you holidaying this year?on safari my, me? not this year I can’t afford the trip trip trip. The junior brings the coffee in her pretty flip flops painted toes go flip flip flip. Spraying lacquer, styling mousse , firming gel and hot brush, hair goes flick flick flick.
Last touches now,a tease here, a lift there.Wow that looks good don’t ya think ! slick slick slick Time to pay into your purse you unzip zip zip ,zip and a tip yes, another dip dip dip !
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cutting your souls
Men and women come in for styles outrageous as they dare dare dare. Couples too come for his and hers styles and I do the pair pair pair. They are always pleased and say my rates are fair fair fair.
They come to me once a month so I can cut their hair hair hair. I make them beautiful so their friends will stare stare stare stare. They say my styles are beautiful, amazing yes I have a flair flair flair.
They have no idea I am collecting their souls, they don’t care care care.They get the unique styles they want, I get souls which I will not share share share share. As I sweep up the cuttings from the floor, well they are spare spare spare.
I am never late, my job is my life and I live up the stairs stair stair stair. This is my life cutting their souls for me it is like breathing air air air air ………………………..
Sep 14, 2011 @ 09:57:04
I love the triple word effect! Really cool. Thanks for visiting my blog =)
Sep 14, 2011 @ 10:02:31
Thank you it is the first time I have used that , it just seemed right. It was a pleasure visiting your blog so thank you too! :o)
Sep 14, 2011 @ 12:49:56
Definitely brought the snip snip snip of the hairdressers to mind, Willow, and the sinking feeling to me when I pay the bill, bill bill after the full transformation. 😀 (I’m always left wondering should I tip or not? I do, but the whole cost nearly give me a heart attack..!!) great worked out rhythm and poem, a treat to read. xPenx
Sep 14, 2011 @ 13:45:08
Thanks, I was at the hairdressers yesterday hence the muse! I usually tip as you say it bumps the price up. I just got to thinking they draw so much information out of you while snipping away and they sweep up your hair . The idea just seeded itself that it could be our souls the hairdresser was collecting. HA! just a silly thought. xx
Sep 14, 2011 @ 14:50:40
The repetition in this one makes me imagine it set to music somehow. Would make a very intriguing song! I’m going to remember this the next time I am in a salon 🙂
Sep 14, 2011 @ 15:08:16
I did hear it as a song and that was just how it came out.
Sep 17, 2011 @ 03:48:20
wonderful take on the art of a hairdresser. the repeating words make this an entertaining read while serving to emphasize the lines. love to see you experimenting with different forms of writing. well done.
Sep 17, 2011 @ 06:45:11
I did , in away hear this one as a song in my head. Thank you for your comments and it is fun to try different things some work some don’t but no harm in trying. I hope toy have a great weekend ahead of you you you you! ;o)